Look, it’s just a story…

Please enlighten me if this is commonplace but it seems a lot of people I know or have known in the past are convinced they can recognise themselves in my books.

Now, like every writer, I tend to take a snippet of conversation, an overheard remark or an interesting personal foible and weave them in to the novels but none of my characters are based on real people – except for one who is fairly recognisable and she is quite happy about it.

There are echoes of real events too, but honestly, nothing like the events in “Death of the Elver Man” or “The Drowners” really happened and certainly not on the beautiful and peaceful Somerset Levels.

You see, it’s a story – I made it up.

Believe me when I say you are not seeing a reflection of yourself. Honest.

A sideline

Sat up too late last night watching “Terminator 3”. Not the best of the franchise (though not as dire as “Terminator Salvation” – whew, what a turkey!) but still quite enjoyable. My guilty secret – I love the first two “Terminator” films, partly as the title character is so compelling. The role model (if it can be called that) is, of course, the Golem, most famously Rabbi Loeb’s Golem of Prague created in 1580. This idea, of a clay man created to be a defender without fear or the ability to feel pain, runs through a lot of folk-lore and literature. It could be argued that Mary Shelley’s “Frankensein”, owes much to the idea.

Well, out in the thick fog this morning I found myself pondering this idea. Visibility was so bad it was impossible to see more than a hundred yards or so and the beach was completely hidden. A ship was making its way up the estuary, fog-horn sounding like a grieving whale and the ghostly echoes gave the whole scene a surreal quality. The road was deserted, ghostly, a setting for some strange and horrific event. Which is why I’m not working on the new novel today but fleshing out (excuse the pun) a new horror story.

Thoughts on a change of direction…

It is getting very cold up here, very fast. It’s also extremely wet and today, whilst out walking the dogs, I encountered a gruesome sight. The mutant slugs we have been warned about are here! Over 10cm long and oozing attitude, I watched one slime its way along the upper promenade leaving the dismembered corpses of several smaller, native slugs in its wake. I felt like setting up some yellow cotton to mark these miniature crime scenes.
Perhaps I should look on these encounters as possible inspiration. The Slug Apocalypse is upon us here in the north-east. There’s a good horror story in there somewhere, I’m sure. Maybe I will take a few days to explore it. After all, my most successful short story was an “end of days” speculation (“Light Years from Home”, http://www.litaward.de/ ).

“The Drowners” : 1st November

The next book in the Alex Hastings series is now scheduled for publication on November 1st 2012. It will be available in paperback and e-book format, from Amazon and other on-line sellers. I will post news of other sellers when I get some news but meanwhile, below is the write-up on the back cover to whet your appetites.

In Somerset it is carnival season once more, but probation officer Alex Hastings is not in the mood to join the festivities. Struck down by a potentially lethal illness, she is beset by problems both at work and within her family. Meanwhile, the demise of Derek Johns’ gang has left a power vacuum, and an uneasy alliance of criminals forms, determined to take control of the area for their own gain.

Then, one night out on the marshes a local man is found dead amidst reports of flickering lights and strange music —and rumours grow of the return of an ancient evil.

This second book in the Alex Hastings series picks up the story six weeks after the finale to Death of the Elver Man, leading Alex and her friends further into the mystery and menace surrounding the Somerset Levels.

Keep watching for news of live readings and book launch.

And another thing…

Probably the most important thing I’ve learned this time round is how vital planning can be. I have the basic outline of each book in my head – what the crime is, who does it, how they get caught, but as the story progresses new characters and events appear and confuse the way. Towards the end it is a bit like building a bridge from both sides of a canyon at the same time. You keep going, adding each layer and hoping it will meet in the middle…
Thankfully after a bit of stripping down and rewriting it did but I don’t want to go through that again!
Off to use my indispensable copy of “Inspiration” mapping software so this time I am working from a much more solid framework.

The next book is an extra – there will be four Somerset books to the series with some stand-alone and possible Kindle-only novellas.

More on this next time.

Less is more – I think

So, what else have I learned this last year?

It is interesting to note many serial works get bigger as they progress. I mean – just look at the first Harry Potter compared to the so-big-it needs-two-films finale. I too have produced a second book some 20% longer than the first volume. Now, this isn’t too bad as “Death of the Elver Man” was only about 86,000 words – a bit short for commercial fiction according to some experts so “The Drowners“, weighing in at 106,000, is spot on. However, I am keeping a very close eye on the process and am determined not to get too indulgent or start slipping into flabby writing. It is understandable there is some spread. “The Drowners” has a wider cast of characters and a lot of the originals are there too so they add more dialogue, action and emotion to the story but I’m keeping it all reasonably compact, I hope.

On Monday I was invited to talk to a forum in town and one man complained that a lot of novelists had too many characters.

“Even Charles Dickens”, he said, accompanied by a nodding of heads from the audience. “There are so many names I can’t keep track of them so I just put the book down and don’t bother”.

There’s an important lesson here I think. I’ve tackled it by keeping the central cast quite small and focusing on different characters in each book. The minor characters will have a chance to step forward and tell their stories, one or two at a time.

At least – that’s the theory.

Second book finished!

I’m happy to say the second Alex Hastings book is finished. Well, actually I’m overjoyed and rather relieved. I did not realise it could be harder to write a sequel – naive of me I know but I’d never done it before.

The first problem concerned serial characters. Some readers will pick up “The Drowners” first – they need to know who these people are and a bit about them. On the other hand, readers from “Death of the Elver Man” have already met Alex, Sue, Simon, Ada….. How to keep the attention of new readers without really hacking off the others?

It has been said the best way to learn about writing is to read other writers’ work so I trawled through my (now rather extensive) crime library in search of help and inspiration. I found the master of this skill, the wonderful Philip Kerr who not only has serial characters in his Bernie Gunter series, he moves them back and forth in time through their lives. Learn from the best…

More to follow, a little more regularly I promise.

Radio interview on Friday

Although I’m currently staying with friends in France, finishing off the second book, I will be talking on Radio Tyne Tees tomorrow (Friday 8th) at about 11.45am, thanks to the wonders of mobile communication. There will be a discussion inspired by Nick Clegg’s apparent desire to write a book and public comments are most welcome. I hope to shed a little light on the minefield that is commercial publishing, the e-book world and life after the first book. Not bad if I can do that in less than 10 minutes! If you can’t tune in, I’ll try to make it available here later in the week.

Don’t forget the literary festival reading on the 20th June – 7pm at the central library, Middlesbrough. Hope to see you there.

Middlesbrough Literary festival

Well, the reading at the University went well and it was lovely meeting up with some of my old friends from the MA course.

My next appearance is on June 20th at the Central Library in Middlesbrough. I will be sharing the stage with two other crime writers from the north east, Valerie Laws and Danielle Ramsey.

The event begins at 7pm and tickets cost £5.

Click on the link below for more information.

Hope to see you there!

http://www.middlesbrough.gov.uk/index.aspx?articleid=3238

Reading this week

I’m preparing for my forthcoming reading at the University of Teesside this Wednesday, 23rd May, at 1pm. I’ll be reading from “Death of the Elver Man” and using a couple of extracts to illustrate how real events in my life have inspired some of the action in the book. I hope to include a sneak preview of the sequel, “The Drowners” too – though I won’t be reading any spoilers!

There will be a chance to ask questions and I will be signing books if anyone wants their copy autographed.
The reading should run for about an hour and is in the Middlesbrough Tower at the University, room 7.02 (seventh floor, room 2).

Looking forward to meeting you if you can make it.